Common Flaws In The MBA Essay And How To Avoid Them
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Common Flaws in MBA Essays and How to Avoid Them
Overview
Many applicants make avoidable mistakes in their MBA essays. Understanding these pitfalls and carefully reviewing your work can help you steer clear of them. Here's a guide to the most common errors and how to avoid them.
Careless Errors
There's no excuse for careless mistakes?"they can significantly impact how you're perceived. You have ample time to proofread and have others review your essay. A typo or grammatical error can make you appear careless or disorganized.
Remember that spell check doesn't catch everything, and grammar check isn't flawless. Beyond typographical errors, pay close attention to ensure your sentences convey your intended meaning. Here are some humorous yet unfortunate examples illustrating the need for careful review:
- "It was like getting admitted to an Ivory League school."
- "Berkeley has a reputation for breeding nationalists and communists."
- "I'd like to attend a college where I can expose myself to many diverse people."
Vague Generalities
Avoid clichés like "I learned the value of hard work," which offer no insightful or original perspective. Instead, be specific and descriptive. For example:
- Before: "In the first project I managed, I learned many valuable lessons about teamwork."
- After: "In my first project, I actively involved my colleagues, seeking their feedback and valuing their expertise."
Sounding contrived often results from trying to force insights into experiences. Instead, let your genuine experiences guide you and illustrate your qualities naturally.
Summarizing Your Resume
A frequent error is simply narrating your resume. While your accomplishments matter, the essay should offer depth, focusing on specific themes or incidents. This is your chance for self-evaluation and to bring your experiences to life, rather than listing them.
Losing Sight of the Big Picture
While details are important, ensure they're relevant and meaningful. Avoid overwhelming technical descriptions or minor details that obscure your key messages. Admission officers want to understand why you’ve made certain choices and how these experiences shaped you.
Long-Windedness
Avoid irrelevant details and redundancy. Conciseness is key. For example:
- Irrelevant Detail: "After meeting my adviser, I decided my global interests would be best served by a double major."
- Redundant: "The experience taught me a great deal about hard work. I learned it requires focus."
Stay focused on what truly illustrates your character and growth.
Big Words
Using complex words doesn't make you seem smarter. Clear, simple language is often more effective. For instance:
- Before: "Although I did a plethora of activities in high school, my assiduous efforts enabled my success."
- After: "Although I juggled many activities in high school, I succeeded through persistent work."
Conclusion
Carefully reviewing your MBA essay multiple times will help you catch common errors. When you find mistakes, take the time to revise thoughtfully. This approach will result in a compelling and effective MBA essay.
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